Very good work.
Okay, it was funny, but the background need's work
I see the work that you have done so far...and I am starting to worry about where this project of yours is going...
Your earlier works has this sort of a Pokemon parody going on which is nice, but then you started going off with a new world around episode 6, and any fans who enjoy Pokemon was confused and when they saw the later episode, they realize that it's not a Pokemon parody anymore, now it's a ripoff of Pokemon.
The gameplay is repetitive, which you think would be improve in later episodes, but it hasn't shown any progress yet, you kept working off at the farm (Or something that's going on in the building that pays you $100) just so you can get some expensive items, and either you sleep so you can recharge your energy or go out and fight 2 random battles before heading back to sleep, it makes the gameplay slow and tedious, if you want it to be faster, then either lower the energy requirement when working at the farm, or increase the payout when working at the farm.
The monsters in ep. 6 and onward range from ok to lazy, with the sex animation feeling lazy and odd, from 09 and onward, the M.C apparently wants to fuck small child like creatures, and not the adult like creatures. One more thing to note. You say that you have 9 new animations, but I could not tell the different between them until I compare the two, that is laziness at best.
The sex animation is also bland and lazy, it's just a few second loop that doesn't feel rewarding, I also don't care about then since I don't have any interactions with then outside of spaming care and fucking them, I need to see the M.C interact with the monsters if I am ever going to care about them, and rework the animation so that each monsters have at lease 2-3 sex animation so it can be rewarding for the player.
And let me talk about the story...I have no Idea what's going on, in ep. 1-5, you have a basic story that anybody can follow, but with ep. 6 and onward, the story starts to get confusing, and even to this day I have no idea what's going on. This whole hunter society storyline of yours is not going to work, you can either go back to the earlier world that you start out with, and continue on with there with the Pokemon creatures, or try to fix the story so that it doesn't have to be confusing.
This is just...bad...
The game's okay, it's not good, but it could've been worse, the art's okay, the music can get repetative, but the biggest problen is the gameplay, there's been some lags, the fist is short range, and your "Army" can't seen to leave the next screem, so I suggested is try to improve the gameplay, and you could get a alright game.
Thanks for the feedback! We plan on continuing to improve the game so look forward to a much improved version!
cool! Glad you like it. Good luck with your video series!
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